I finally buckled down on the first chapter of Knight Commander and after review and major rewriting, I was able to salvage it into what I beleive to be a good piece. I tried my very best to keep my tenses coherent (thanks
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Yeah, except, that's not all you know because you're bright and you're curious and you worked hard, and you got into Smith and you got your law degree where? Cambridge, Massachusetts. You lose, I win. 'Twas ever thus.
I finally buckled down on the first chapter of Knight Commander and after review and major rewriting, I was able to salvage it into what I beleive to be a good piece. I tried my very best to keep my tenses coherent (thanks