I just finished chapter six and started chapter seven. Chapter Six saw an interesting development… I introduced a new character that seemed to demand a lot of on-screen time from me. I created the character as a means of showing the lower decks of the ship instead of always showing a top-down kind of story; like showing off a facet of my main character through the eyes of a subordinate officer, but now I’m thinking of using her to create a subplot involing her and her older brother, who is in the equivalent of the SEALs in my universe.

Note: Chapter Six ended up with 18 pages and 12,000+ words. It’s the largest chapter in the story so far.

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47,149 / 50,000
(93.0%)