Okay, so I killed chapter thirteen and merged it with chapter twelve because it didn’t make any sense to break up the flow of the story like that. So, chapter sixteen is now chapter fifteen, and all the remaining chapters have now moved up a notch.
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Do you post the changes to the fictionpress page you linked me to before? I want to start reading but I don’t want to read an earlier draft.
The version that’s on the site is the latest draft, but it only goes up to a certain point. If you want to read the latest, I can send you the word doc 😉
Ok! If you want to, go ahead and send it. firstname.lastname@example.org