I’ve been tinkering around with following up a short story I wrote three years ago. In order to really provide a proper frame of reference, that short story is located here:
The novella I’m working on has the first chapter done, and it is located here:
The Sacrifice of Agamemnon: http://fiction.hopestation.net/viewstory.php?sid=7
I know a lot of you aren’t Trek fans, but I could use some insight on whether or not I’m proceeding in the right direction.