I finally buckled down on the first chapter of Knight Commander and after review and major rewriting, I was able to salvage it into what I beleive to be a good piece. I tried my very best to keep my tenses coherent (thanks
I finally buckled down on the first chapter of Knight Commander and after review and major rewriting, I was able to salvage it into what I beleive to be a good piece. I tried my very best to keep my tenses coherent (thanks